Thursday, November 21, 2013

earthquake reading

planets reading

          1. "what? why am i  shaking!" ellie screamed . " earthquake!!!!!!!" dad screamed

           2. crash! a vase smashed to the floor , the floor was trembling. "earthquake!" dad screamed

           3. 'why am i shaking?' ellie thought "earthquake" dad screamed      

what am i learning:use different starters

why am i learning:get better a writing
next:i will try to write smaller

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