Why I am doing this :I am doing this because we were trying to write a persuasive speech about bringing back a dinosaur.
My next step : my next step would be to order my arguments with more focus.
Tuesday, November 18, 2014
My dinosaur speech
Why I am doing this :I am doing this because we were trying to write a persuasive speech about bringing back a dinosaur.
My next step : my next step would be to order my arguments with more focus.
Sunday, November 16, 2014
Tuesday, October 14, 2014
School Athletics
I am working on my vortex.
I am doing this to develop my throwing technique.
My next step is to get better at my gripping technique.
Sunday, September 7, 2014
Sunday, June 22, 2014
Sunday, June 15, 2014
Thursday, June 12, 2014
this is a Badian A Badian lives in my basement and sometimes a broken boat, A Badian eats brains and drinks blood while beating their hands into people's bloody organs in buildings, A Badian likes brains blood and broken buildings with boats, A Badian wears torn up clothes with blood spilled every where on them,
Sunday, June 8, 2014
Monday, May 26, 2014
Wednesday, May 14, 2014
Falling from the sky
Running across the branch as I fall to the ground.
A leaf softly caught me as it danced by,
I join my friends in a puddle that's fine,
No one knows we never die , if they said we did , that would be a lie.
Water droplet
W hen it rains the clouds go black like 100 bats
A t winter time the rainfalls hard like tiny pebbles
T he warm drops of water land on my skin
E ver and ever the downpour never ends
R ain dances in the sky like 10 million ballerinas
D arkness fills the sky when rain falls
R ainbows shine bright when rain stops
O ne,two,three.....I count the drops of rain
P owerful downpours crash the road
L ettingthe velvet warmth touch my skin
E very drop gets warmer and clearer
T he airis cold but the rain makes everything warm and silky
:) ;) :) ;) :)
Monday, April 7, 2014
Monday, March 24, 2014
Tuesday, March 4, 2014
View the prezi This is Elijah by elijah flordeliz
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Sunday, March 2, 2014
Reading term 1 show not tell example
He frowned , tears rolling down his cheek. He held the gun on top of his ears , his last words were
"I hate my life" pulled the trigger and a muzzle flash was the last thing he saw.
Tuesday, February 25, 2014
Thursday, November 21, 2013
earthquake reading
planets reading
1. "what? why am i shaking!" ellie screamed . " earthquake!!!!!!!" dad screamed
2. crash! a vase smashed to the floor , the floor was trembling. "earthquake!" dad screamed
3. 'why am i shaking?' ellie thought "earthquake" dad screamed
what am i learning:use different starters
why am i learning:get better a writing
next:i will try to write smaller
1. "what? why am i shaking!" ellie screamed . " earthquake!!!!!!!" dad screamed
2. crash! a vase smashed to the floor , the floor was trembling. "earthquake!" dad screamed
3. 'why am i shaking?' ellie thought "earthquake" dad screamed
what am i learning:use different starters
why am i learning:get better a writing
next:i will try to write smaller
Wednesday, November 20, 2013
writing
shark attack preview walt: use different sentence openers
waves swayed him, he was ready to dive in. no one has ever done what josh is doing.
what am i learning: use different sentence openers
why am i learning:so i get good at writing sentences
what next:i need better fullstops
waves swayed him, he was ready to dive in. no one has ever done what josh is doing.
what am i learning: use different sentence openers
why am i learning:so i get good at writing sentences
what next:i need better fullstops
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